Correct The Teacher's Paragraph

The one thing that I would keep if I had to give away everthing would be my books. I would keep my books because they help me disappear into another world. I love to read and forget about all my problems for awhile. I like to curl up with a blanket. I like to turn on some music, and I like to read for hours. But if I can't have all the other stuff at least I would have some books to read.

Journal

If I had to sell my belongings the one thing I would keep is my T.V. and DVD player because I really enjoy watching T.V. and watching movies. Without those two things it would be so boring and I would hate life.

Salem Oregon Essay

The reason I chose this picture was because here in Salem we got a lot of bums that are homeless and don't have anything. Most of them stay in shelters but the shelters get full fast so some bums get stuck sleeping outside in parks or under bridges. The reason I think we have a lot of bums here in Salem is because a lot of them get hooked on drugs, and then they start losing everything they have.

ANGER

The one time I got angry was this last halloween. I was walkin around with my family, girlfriend, and my nephews, when some rival gang members ran up on me and started talkin crap to me in front of my family and my girl. I got really angry because they disrespected me and my family. I got so angry that i just started swinging at the biggest one then they jumped me. But I pretty much knew I was gonna get jumped because SnortenoS never go one on one they always jump people. But after all of that happened and they took off I realized I should have just ignored them.

Sentence Combining

1.Cole shuddered and had another spasm, but he had chills as Rosie shoved Edwin lightly.

2.Cole sipped water out of the glass as he struggled to swallow the pills.

3.Cole closed his eyes while Rosie cleaned and bandaged his open wounds.

Sentence Combining

Cole struggled to shift his position, but the ground was uneven and the stiffness has set into his joints like hardened cement.

Cole grimaced as he struggled to raise his knee but couldn't.

All his life he had been haunted with nightmares that
were of helplessness.

Circle Justice journal

If I were on Cole's Circle Justice I Wouldn't make a big deal about what had happened because everybody makes mistakes. The only thing I would do is send him to detention for a couple days then I would make him appologize to the person he hurt.

Sentence Correcting

1.His father asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.
2.The fog was thick. It was hard to see.
3.He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.
4.He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.
5.Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didn't help.
6.He gets upset when he thinks about the war.

Winter Break

For christmas me and my family went to Mt.Angel to spend time with all of the family and open presents. It was alot of fun. For new years I went to a party and kicked it with some people, that was also fun.
The only part that I didn"t like over winter break was all that snow we had here in Salem. I thought it was interesting how much snow we got. From what i heard that was the most snow we got in a couple years. All of my family enjoyed the snow but I didn't like it ecause it stopped me from doing things that i needed to do.