Secret Life Of Bees

1.They lived in a Pink house that remained a scorched shock on the back of her eyelids.
2.There is a pink light shining off the house.
3.There are June bugs all around.
4.There was a picket fence.

She writes differently than I would. If i were to write a story explaing how my house looks i wouldn't write exactly everything, I would just write the important things people want to know about the house. I would use different words. I wouldn't use so much detail like she did.